Saturday, November 17, 2007

advertising (3)

In my mind I have the following points of improvement for advertising:
1. Quality of source, of course.
2. Cut off the episode with bed, add more sailing episodes, shorten the chef episode.
3. Slogan in final episode should appear earlier.
4. Wording.

And when Olaf saw the video, he gave me advise to change the yacht part slogans to "this is my" style. E.g. this is my chef... this is my root... Peer advise rulezzz!

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